Jimmypig's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Lejin - Ses in StrEsS]

ooooooooooooooooooo

I hate hip hop, but this is quite good! My only problem is the vox are a bit to loud, need to mix they in with the instruments a bit, plus I can tell youve just pitch shifted some of them, if your gonna pitchshift, dont make it obvious

also nice and offensive haha, good work

Lejin responds:

Thats how his 5$ mic sounds on the real man LOL

[space-run]

Nice

nice and crisp intro, good drop, and the flow doesnt go which is key for this style.

Great track, keep it up!

[Computer Noises (DjD)]

Quite diverse and spooky

I actually quite liked this one, nice crisp sounds, nice rhymic notation, and different which is good.

Mad-Muppet responds:

Thanks for your review :)

[Church Road]

Okay, advice.

Youve got the right idea with ambient, keeping it simple and it does have that sense of emptyness, I particularly like the gloomy feel bells at 0:30

but you need to do more to the sounds, there all on the same sort of level if you get me, theres no panning or wideness to it, it feels like im listening to a song, not like im IN the song which is what ambient should do.

Try dropping a stereo widener on the mixer for the lead, or a phase inverter (if you dont know how pm me ill be happy to help)

keep trying, and good luck!

[Happy (DJ Beat)]

Hmmm

Okay, I can tell youve tryed to make this different and I can see were you were trying to go...

But i can also tell you got bored and decided to copy and paste a lot instead of writing new riffs

Try some diversity, add an offbeat here and there, a drop and a pulse, it seems very "onioney" if that makes sense lol (as in you can tell were youve just deleted a layer or added one)

good try tho and good luck with your next tracks

Mercenary1991 responds:

hehe actually that was the meaning but jeje what ever :) glad you made a honest comment though.

[Zero Gravity]

lol tbfh

it makes me laugh the people on here who suck up to you because they think they might get laid.... You know some of them do, we all know it

good song... you seem to have a knack for getting the drums just right in all your songs, they sound almost pro standard (if not completely in some cases) cause i can tell you spent about 3 minutes making the bass/mid riffs but with drums that good you can put anything under

loved the zelda-esque effects hidden in there aswell

(yes getting laid!)

[ParagonX9 - Chaoz Fantasy]

amg

amazing, i loved it, one of the very few songs which deserve to be on the front audio page.

+ para have my kids

[]|[ Eternal Hearts ]|[]

yes

this is what music should sound like

[Lake Hylia]

Okay

I did like the idea, its one of my favorite zelda songs...

and you ALMOST had a winner but some advice:

the wave sfx needs to be edited, it sounded like it had a mind of its own! stopping and starting at will... stretch it out, give it more attack and fade, play it less..

turn down the ride or strech it a bit, give it some shimmer

and make it a bit slower, the best thing about this tune is the feel of the notation, but at this speed its hard to appreciate it...

but good first upload!

Zeke30695 responds:

Thanks for the review and tips. BTW this isn't my first upload XD but thats ok.